【书面表达答题“五步曲”】

　　第一步：认真审题，确定文章体裁、主题。

　　第二步：在草稿纸上根据题目要求列出规定的要点，然后列出每个要点所需短语或句型，并适当拓展。注意选取合适的时态。

　　第三步：将所列语言材料组合写成连贯通顺的文章。注意使用合适的连词和承上启下的句子。注意开头点题，结尾要有合适的结束语。

　　第四步：仔细读一遍草稿，挑出错误，对拿不准的句子或词语进行修改或删减。(宁缺毋滥)注意控制词数(若要求60～80词，则75词左右最佳)。

　　第五步：将修改无误的短文工整地誊抄在卷面上。

　　【话题链接】

　　针对遵义近几年书面表达的考情，我们对“观点类”“做法类”“校园生活类”“家庭生活与情感类”这四种不同的话题写作角度有着不同的解题方法与技巧，具体如下：

　　话题1　发表观点类　针对某一现象或话题发表自己的观点，如2016和2014遵义真题。

　　【常见短语及句型】

　　·Some believe that…，while others think that…有些人相信……，而有些人认为……

　　·There are two sides of opinion of it，one is…，the other is…关于这点有两方面，一是……，另一个是……

　　·As far as I am concerned/in my opinion(view)我认为……

　　·From my point of view，I think…在我看来……

　　·The reason why…is that… ……的原因是……

　　·For one thing，…for another…一方面，……另一方面，……

　　·On one hand，…On the other hand，…一方面，……另一方面，……

　　·First，…Second，…Last but not least，…首先，……其次，……最后但同样重要的是，……

　　·From all what I said，I agree to the thought that…从所有我所说的来看，我同意……的看法

　　·In my view，I hold the point of view that…在我看来，我支持……的观点

　　·I am sure my opinion is both…and…我相信我的观点既……又……

　　·It is very important/difficult/useful/exciting to do…做……很重要/困难/有用/令人激动

　　话题2　做法类　针对某一现象或事件中学生该怎么做。如2015遵义真题。

　　【常见短语及句型】

　　We should get up early.我们应该早起。

　　·don't push each other when we go downstairs 下楼时不要互相推挤

　　·pay attention to traffic rules 注意交通规则

　　·obey the traffic/public rules 遵守交通/公共规则

　　·wait in line 排队

　　·don't play with fire 不要玩火

　　·call for help 寻求帮助

　　·save food 节约食物

　　·eat up 吃光

　　·pick up 捡起

　　·have a good habit 有一个良好的习惯

　　·take action together 一起行动起来

　　·go to bed early and get up early 早睡早起

　　·stay up 熬夜

　　·do more exercise 多做运动

　　·eat more fruit and vegetables 多吃水果蔬菜

　　·keep away from 远离

　　·respect the teachers and the old 尊敬师长

　　·eat a balanced diet 均衡饮食

　　·eat less junk food 少吃垃圾食品

　　·be supposed to care for 应该关心……

　　·respect others 尊重他人

　　话题3　校园生活类　记叙校园学习或生活有关的事件。如2012、2013遵义真题。

　　【常见短语及句型】

　　This is my worst day.这是我最糟糕的一天。

　　·How time flies!时光飞逝!

　　·I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you.我从未对你表达过我的谢意和敬意。

　　·Thank you very much for everything you've done for me.非常感谢你为我所做的一切。

　　·My middle school life is meaningful and colorful.I will never forget it.我的中学生活丰富多彩。我将永远都不会忘记。

　　·I am so proud that I made it.我很自豪我成功了。

　　·I kept practicing doing our best to help people who need help.我认为我们应该尽自己最大的努力帮助那些需要帮助的人。

　　·If everyone helps others，the world will become much more beautiful!如果每个人都去帮助别人，世界将会更加美好!

　　·This is my day.It's a funny day.How about you?这就是我的一天。很有趣的一天，你呢?

　　·I really had a good time on my…birthday.I will treasure it forever.在我……岁的生日上我真的很开心。我会永远珍惜它。

　　·I've learned a lot from it.我从中学到了很多。

　　话题4　家庭生活与情感类　对家人或朋友，老师表达感激之情。如2013遵义真题。

　　【常见短语和句型】

　　·Thanks very much for staying with me.

　　·I'm glad to receive your letter.

　　·I'm writing to say thanks to you.

　　·I still remember that we went to…together.

　　·I can't help remembering you，my dearest mother.

　　·It's your kindness and love that supports me a lot in my life.

　　·When I was…，I caught a cold and had a high fever in a midnight.

　　·It's you who took good care of me day and night until I recovered to be well again.

　　·You are the best mother in the world.

　　·I love you.

　　·I will try my best to work hard and be an excellent boy/girl to reward your love.

　　·I hope you are in good health forever.

　　,2017备考猜押

　　话题1　发表观点类

　　Group 1(2016西宁中考)

　　生活中有很多重要的东西，你认为生活中最重要的东西是什么?为什么它是最重要的(至少说出三点理由)? 既然你认为它最重要，该如何对待呢?请你以“The Most Important Thing in My Life” 为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

　　The Most Important Thing in My Life

　　In my opinion，the most important thing in my life is time.However long one may live，his life has only a certain number of years.And once the time goes by，nobody can get it back.Even though he is the richest person in the world，he cannot afford to waste time，because it means that he is wasting his own life.

　　The only thing we can do is to make full use of our time.If we can finish more work with less time，we will have more time than other people.

　　Group 2(2016嘉兴中考)

　　英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning 投稿。

　　注意：1.短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法。

　　2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

　　3.词数：80～100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

　　短文首句：In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.

　　In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.

　　We shared different ideas.

　　Some say it's better to spend more time with family.The more we get together，the better we understand each other.Family members should share happiness and worries.For example，when they have problems，we should try to cheer them up.Others believe it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays.

　　I think，showing love for family is necessary.If we help with housework，they may feel warmer.Sometimes，even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.Though we're young，we can do much to make a happier home.

　　Group 3(2016绍兴中考)

　　针对大部分高中要求学生住校的现状，英语课上同学们就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展开调查，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报调查结果，表达你的意愿并阐述理由。

大部分学生	愿意	1.方便与同学交流。 2．学会照顾自己。
一些学生	不愿意	1.在家能休息得更好。 2．与家人相处时间更长。
你	……	……

　　注意：1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节。

　　2.你的理由至少两条。

　　3.词数：80～100。

　　4.短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：方便的convenient

　　短文首句：Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result.

　　Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result.Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates.Also，they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.

　　However，some students think living at home is a better choice.The main reason is that they can relax better at home.Besides，they can spend more time with family members and get on better with them.

　　As for me，I'd like to live in school.That's because I can spend more time on study.What's more，it's wonderful experience to live with other classmates.

　　话题2　做法类

　　Group 4(2016宜宾中考)

　　班级将举行英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图以“How to Be Happy”为题目，写一篇90词左右的演讲稿，开头和结尾已给出(不计入总数)Good morning，everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”.The following are my suggestions.

　　Good morning，everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”.The following are my suggestions.

　　First of all，we should have life aims.When we have life aims，we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.

　　Next，we must keep healthy.Without good health，we will have nothing.So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day.

　　Finally，we ought to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble，we can get much happiness.

　　I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life.

　　That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!

　　Group 5(2016齐齐哈尔中考)

　　千百年来，书籍传承着人类的文明。然而随着互联网的发展，国民尤其是青少年对网络游戏的痴迷，使得阅读渐渐地退出中学生的生活。就“如何在学生中开展阅读活动”，请根据以下提示写一篇英语小短文。

　　提示：1.读书的好处。

　　2.如何开展读书活动：①在图书馆阅读。②在班级建立图书角。③同学间互借。④计划阅读时间及阅读量。

　　3.……

　　要求：1.词数：80词左右。

　　2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。

　　3.文章内容可适当发挥。

　　How to Have Reading Activities

　　How to Have Reading Activities?As we all know，it is important for us to read books.It not only make us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves.I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.

　　First，we can read in our school library.There are all kinds of books there.It's a good place to read.Second，we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class.Third，we can exchange books with one another.It helps develop our cooperation spirit.At last，it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.

　　All in all，we can benefit from colorful reading activities.

　　话题3　校园生活类

　　Group 6(2016吉林中考)

　　随着中国的发展，世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人，我们更应该学好汉语。请以“My Chinese Learning ”为题，写一篇短文。

　　内容包括：1.为什么要学好汉语?

　　2.谈谈自己学习汉语的经历。

　　3.介绍1-2条学习汉语的方法。

　　写作要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数。

　　2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

　　My Chinese Learning

　　With the development of China，Chinese is becoming more and more popular.As native speakers，it's our duty to learn Chinese well.It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.

　　Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school.At first，I used to be weak in it，and I felt stressed out.My Chinese teacher advised me to read morning books.From then on，reading played an important role in my life，I often went to the library which was near my home.I made much more progress in Chinese.

　　I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well.Also，it's necessary to practice writing as often as we can.Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.

　　Group 7(2016十堰中考)

　　这次考试结束后，你将怎样度过一个有意义的暑假。请用英语写一篇文章给你自己及小伙伴们一些好的建议。内容必须包括以下要点：

　　①走亲访友和家人一起共度美好时光。②和好朋友一起看电影，听音乐……③假期我们应该加强体育锻炼，增强体质。④你还有什么别的建议(至少两条)，词数80-100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation

　　after the Exam

　　It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam.There are kinds of activities for us to take part in.

　　First we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family.Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful.Third，we should take more exercise to keep healthy.What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school.Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot.

　　Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.

　　Group 8(2015娄底中考)

　　亲爱的同学们，三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师们。请根据下面表格的内容，谈谈你熟悉的英语老师。

　　My English Teacher

Name	Ms.Li
Age	35
Looks	tall，beautiful，long curly hair
Hobbies	reading，singing, dancing，
playing sports
Character(性格)	patient，friendly，warm­hearted
My comment(评价)	a good teacher，a friend，a mother

　　I have met many excellent teachers in junior school.One of them is my English teacher.Her name is Ms.Li.She__is__35__years__old.She__is__tall__and__beautiful__with__long__curly__hair.In__her__free__time，she__likes__reading，singing__and__dancing.She__also__enjoys__playing__sports.In__the__school__when__we__ask__her__questions，she__is__very__patient.Every__time__we__have__trouble，she__is__always__friendly__and__warm­hearted__to__help__us.She__is__a__good__teacher.She__is__like__not__only__our__friend__but__also__our__mother.

　　Group 9(2016巴中中考)

　　用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用无形的精神感染身边每一个人——这就是“阳光少年”。请以“A Sunshine Teenager ”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”高飞。

　　要点提示：

　　1.善良友好，乐于助人，与人融洽相处。(如：去敬老院为老人读报，打扫房间，洗衣服)

　　2.不怕困难，勤奋好学，喜欢读书。

　　3.性格外向，积极参加各种文体活动。(如：与同学踢球，参加各种俱乐部)

　　要求：

　　1.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。

　　2.短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐词翻译。

　　3.80词左右，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：get on well with;take an active part in

　　A Sunshine Teenager

　　Hello!My name is Xiao Ming.I'm studying in No.1 Middle School.Our school had an activity“Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”.From then on，there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

　　Gao Fei is one of them.He is__honest__and__kind.He__gets__on__well__with__others.He__is__always__ready__to__not__only__help__others__but__also__go__to__the__old__people's__home__to__do__something__for__the__old.He__reads__newspapers__for__them，cleans__their__rooms__and__washes__their__clothes.Also__he__is__warm­hearted，active__and__outgoing.He__always__helps__his__parents__do__housework，such__as__doing__the__dishes，sweeping__the__floor__and__making__dinner.He__is__never__afraid__of__difficulties.He__works__very__hard__and__he__likes__reading.And__he__takes__part__in__all__kinds__of__sports.After__school，he__plays__football__with__his__classmates.And__he__joins__the__school__clubs，such__as__music__club，the__art__club__and__the__chess__club.He__learns__a__lot__from__all__his__activities.

　　Gao Fei is the best sunshine teenager in my heart.I should learn from him.

　　Group 10(2016毕节中考)

　　最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢?

　　请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。

　　写作要点提示：

　　1.与父母和谐相处很重要。

　　2.与父母和谐相处的做法或建议：

　　(1)理解与尊重父母(如倾听与有礼貌表达想法);

　　(2)多与父母交流(如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼);

　　(3)为父母做一些力所能及的事。

　　3.与父母和谐相处的感受。

　　How to Get on Well with Our Parents?

　　Recently it's reported that many children can't get on well with their parents.How can we get on well with our parents? Here are some suggestions.

　　First we should understand our parents and respect them.We should listen to them and express our ideas politely.Second we should often communicate with them.We can share our happiness with our parents and tell them about our worries.Third，we should help them to do some housework at home，we should help clean the room，do the dishes and so on.

　　If we follow these，I think we can get on well with them.

　　Group 11(2016金华中考)

　　假如你是No.2 Middle School的学生李华，下周，一批英国中学生将来你们学校进行为期两周的学习和交流。

　　请根据下列表格中的要点，写一封自荐信，邀请其中一位学生来你家居住。

Key points
(要点)	Words and expressions for reference(参考词汇)
Like to do	make friends，…
Able to do	good at，know English culture，…
Family	friendly，helpful，able to speak
English…

　　注意：1.短文内容可适当增加;2.文中不得出现真实的人名和姓名;3.词数：80～100;4.短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

　　短文首句：I am Li Hua，a student from No.2 Middle School.

　　Dear friend，

　　I am Li Hua，a boy(girl) student from No.2 Middle School.I'm writing to invite you to come and stay in my home during the next two weeks.

　　I like to make friends.This is the main reason I write this letter.I'm also good at sports and know something about British culture.Do you think we will have a lot to talk about?

　　As for my family，you will like it the moment you come.My parents are not only kind and friendly，but also helpful.Believe it or not，they can also speak English.

　　Do you think I am your first choice now?Look forward to meeting you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　话题4　家庭生活与情感类

　　Group 12(2016安顺中考)

　　“感恩”是一个永恒的教育主题，孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。父爱如山高，母爱如海深。父母是每个人在世上最亲的人，作为即将初中毕业的你，应该感恩父母孝敬父母。请你结合自身情况，完成A、B两项写作任务。

　　要求：1.要点齐全，内容连贯。

　　2.三段写作，书写整洁。

　　参考词汇：1.help sb. with sth.帮忙……做……

　　2.understand 理解

　　3.communicate with sb.与某人交流

　　4.farm work 农活

　　5.do some housework 做一些家务活

　　A.用完整的句子或简略答语回答下列五个问题。

　　1.What do your father and mother do?

　　My__father__is__a__policeman__and__my__mother__is__a__housewife.

　　2.How old are your parents?

　　They're__forty__years__old.

　　3.What is your mother or father like?

　　My__mother__is__beautiful，kind__and__hard­working.My__father__is__handsome__and__brave.

　　4.Do you really love your parents?

　　Yes，I__do.

　　5.What should you do to thank your father and mother?

　　I__should__often__help__them__with__housework__or__farm__work__and__find__time__to__communicate__with__them，trying__our__best__to__understand__them.

　　B.请你根据自己对“感恩父母”的认识和理解，结合以上五个问题，请以“How to Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题，写一篇80—100词的英语短文。不能照抄前面已有的材料，文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

　　How to Be Thankful to Our Parents

　　Our parents are the dearest people to us in the world.For me，I have a really happy family because I love my parents very much.

　　In fact，both my parents in their early forties are still young.My mother is a housewife and my father is a policeman，but they enjoy doing their work.Actually，my mother is beautiful, kind and hard­working.My father is handsome and brave，so I am proud of him.How can we thank our parents? I think we should often help them with housework or farm work and find time to communicate with them，trying our best to understand them.

　　In my opinion，we should always be grateful to our parents and do all that we can to thank them，do you think so?

　　Group 13(2016雅安中考)

　　假如你是 Millie，上星期你们搬家后， 你有了属于自己的房间。请你用英语写一篇 80—100 词的短文介绍你的房间。短文开头已经给出， 但不计入总词数。可适当发挥。

　　要求：1.房间是粉红色的， 使人感觉温暖。

　　2.有一张大而舒适的床和一张书桌。

　　3.书桌上有一台电脑， 可以在学习之后放松自己。

　　4.你会打扫房间并保持房间整洁。

　　5.你的房间是你学习和放松最好的地方， 你非常喜欢它。

　　Last week，we moved a new house.I have my own room now.My__room__is__pink.It__makes__me__feel__comfortable__and__warm.There__is__a__big__and__comfortable__bed__and__a__desk__in__my__room.And__there__is__a__computer__on__the__desk.I__like__my__room.It__is__the__place__that__we__can__study__and__relax.I__will__clean__my__room__every__day__and__I__can__keep__it__clean__and__tidy.