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2016年托福考试口语例题及范文推荐(19)

来源 :中华考试网 2016-11-30

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  I believe zoos are doing 【more】 harm than good to animals.

  【加长版】Firstly, living atthe zoo is not good for their physical health. In our local zoos, even though they have food to eat,animals like lions, tigers and monkeys are actually confined to tight space like cages and thus they cannot move, run, climb,hunt or play around like they did in their natural habitat, which will damage their health.

  【简洁版】Firstly, living atthe zoo is not good for their physical health. In our local zoos, animals like lions, tigers and monkeys are actually confined to tightspace like cages and thus they cannot move, run or play around like they did in their naturalhabitat, which will damage their health.

  【加长版】Second, it’s also badfor their mental health. As we all know, many animals are social species and live in groups innature. So, staying at the zoo will make them feel very lonely, which may impair their mental health and even cause some chronic diseases.

  【简洁版】Second, it’s also badfor their mental health. As we all know, many animals are social species and live in groups innature. So, staying at the zoo will make them feel very lonely, which may cause some chronic mental illness.

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