根据所给内容,写一篇100词左右的记叙文。
来源 :焚题库 2020-08-13
中根据所给内容,写一篇100词左右的记叙文。
上周日下午,我和朋友们正在中山公园散步,突然听到一落水女孩呼救。我和我的一位朋友跳入湖里救出孩子,当时落水女孩已停止呼吸。我用学过的急救知识给她做了人工呼吸,我的朋友给急救中心(the First Aid Centre)打电话。结果女孩得救了,大夫们夸我做得对。
参考答案:
Last Sunday afternoon my friends and l were walking in Zhongshan Park when we suddenly heard someone calling for help.A girl fell into the lake and she was in danger.One of my friends and I jumped into the lake and swam towards the girl. When she was pulled out of it.she had stopped breathing.I had learned sonic knowledge about first aid at sch001.So I tried to start her breath by using the mouth-to-mouth way.My friend phoned the First Aid Centre.Within ten minutes the girl began to breathe again and the doctors from the First Aid Centre arrived. The girl Was saved.They all said that what I did was right.
答案解析:记叙文应交代清楚故事发生的时间、人物,要把事情发生的全过程讲清楚,注意文章的连贯性,行文要流畅、通顺。