第一部分：困境：

　　一.评分标准：语言第一位;结构第二位;内容第三位;

　　二.滔滔不绝意识流：

　　1) 自由分段不可取;(compact)

　　2) 语言杂乱不可取;(concise)

　　3) 一段文章不可取;(concrete)

　　三.无话可说真难受：

　　1) 立论法: 广告效应，(P114)电脑时代，技术改变生活，大学学费上涨，学习和成功的关系，(P154: 朋友和家庭，电视上瘾, 劣质产品, 城乡差距), 环境保护的重要性

　　驳论法:是否应该购买外国货,是否应该禁放烟花爆竹

　　四.思维跳跃断层多：

　　启：first, at present, first of all, above all, at the first place, on the one hand, for one thing, to begin with, 为第一观点。

　　承：second, on the other hand, in addition, additionally, moreover, what is more, furthermore, third, last but not least,为第二观点

　　转: But, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, unlike, otherwise, conversely, unfortunately, whereas, unfortunately, surprisingly, ironically

　　合：Accordingly, therefore, as a result, consequently, in conclusion, to sum up, in general, on the whole, by and large, in brief, briefly speaking

　　因果：due to/ owing to/thanks to/as a result of + 名词

　　___ in order to + 动词

　　Along with/Coupled with + 名词

　　As/since/because+句子

　　Coupled with A is B that contributes to (is responsible for) C

　　引用：As the saying goes, as somebody put it,

　　句型首尾：Given all the above factors, it is safe to reach the conclusion that

　　Taking into account all the above factors, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion

　　五、低级错误常出现:

　　三一致：主谓一致;时态一致;人称一致;两不能：不能串句，不能断句