第一节改写对话

　　66.【高分范文】

　　Linda is going to help her grandfather move out this weekend. Her grandfather is living in a two-story house at Morris Plains, but he doesn't like it because it is too big for him to live alone. He wants to live in a smaller apartment closer to Linda, with a supermarket and a hospital in the neighborhood. So Linda helps him to find this smallest apartment in the neighborhood, which is less than a mile away from her own house. This apartment meets his all needs and he is very glad now.

　　【写作点金】

　　本题要求把对话改写成一篇小短文介绍Linda帮祖父搬家的事情。改写时首先要注意语气的变化，应由对话的第一、二人称转换为第三人称的客观陈述语气;其次，抓住和祖父搬家有关的事项要点，进行重新排序，先概述Linda周末要帮祖父搬家，再阐明祖父为何不想在原住处居住，以及他对新居的要求;最后再表明Linda帮忙寻找的新居符合祖父的要求，他很满意。这样才能做到短文思路清晰，叙述条理。

　　【高频词句】

　　alone独自地

　　too…to…太…而不能…

　　close to离…近

　　less than少于

　　第二节应用文写作

　　67.【高分范文】

　　Dear Bob,

　　We are going to hold a party in honor of my friend Wang Ping's 18th birthday next Friday ( September 18 ), in Shuang hai Holiday Inn and we will be very pleased to invite you to join us. The party will start at 6:30 p. m. with a special coming-of-age ceremony, followed by a series of activities like dinner, singing, dancing and drinking.

　　Please give me an early reply. We all hope to see you there.

　　Yours' truly,

　　Li Ming

　　【写作点金】

　　这是应用文文体写作中的电子邮件。首先应该注意电子邮件的格式;其次要说明自己写邮件的目的，向对方详细说明聚会的具体安排情况，包括时间、地点及具体活动内容，写作时要避免使用过多的简单句，注意句式变化多样性。

　　【高频词句】

　　聚会：party，get—together

　　表达邀请的句型有：

　　I am writing to invite you to…

　　Would you come to join us?

　　We all hope your arrival to our party.

　　请求对方回复可用：

　　Please give me an reply as soon as possible.

　　Hope to get your early reply.

　　或用缩略语R.S.V.P.(敬盼回复)