2016雅思写作范文:文化类(1)
来源 :中华考试网 2016-11-01
中【薛鹏点评】:旅行中的偏见可能是来自文化和传统的差异。
解析:…… account for the appearance of culture prejudice. …… 解释了文化偏见的出现
解析:Westerners might consider this kind of malediction as a curse for their children 西方人认为望子成龙的祝福,其实是一种诅咒(因为在西方的文化里,龙是怪物,而非图腾)
四段:解决策略的展开:针对原因
Several methods should be adopted to help tourists minimize the potential culture bias or emotional misunderstanding. Primarily, before paying a visit to one tourism destination, it is feasible to specialize in the customs, histories and local people’s lifestyle. For example, if a western visitor aims to do some sightseeing in the Chinese minority areas like Tibet, it is wise to get to know some taboo, learn some simple minority language and the minority tradition. Also, efforts should be made by those tourist guides or local mass media to disseminate local cultures and popularize some relevant travel taboo. In this sense, people will acquire the first-hand knowledge and thus have a deeper insight into a new country.
【薛鹏点评】:为了减少旅行中的偏见,旅行者,导游,当地媒体应该共同努力。
解析:Several methods should be adopted to help sb to do sth 我们应该采取措施,帮助某人去做……
解析:pay a visit to sp = visit sp = explore sb = do some sightseeing in sp v参观某地
拓展:it is feasible to do sth = it is viable to do sth 做……是可行的
解析:also, efforts should be made by …… 第二,……应该做出努力去……
解析:disseminate local cultures and popularize some relevant travel taboo 传播当地文化,普及相关的旅行禁忌
尾段:再次亮明观点:
Overall,it is no easy task to iron out possible bias and conflicts before visiting some hot scenic spots. However, memorable travel experience favors the prepared minds.
【薛鹏点评】: 自然结尾,余音绕梁。
解析:It is no east task to iron out the possible bias and conflicts. 消除潜在的偏见和冲突, 绝非易事。
解析:iron out v 消除……
解析:visit some hot scenic spots v参观一些人们的旅游景区
解析:Memorable travel experience favors the prepared minds. 美好的旅行回忆留给了做好准备的人。
Tips:
1. culture shock n文化休克
解析:主要是来自于两个不同文化差异而引起。可以发生在任何时候,任何新环境。当你到达一个地方觉得很陌生、很困惑,不知道自己的角色是什么、应定位在哪里?应怎么表现才恰当等等,觉得很不舒服。
2. cultural taboo n文化禁忌
解析:文化禁忌是指在某个民族或宗教传统文化里禁忌的一些事物,行动或言语。