2018年12月大学英语六级作文真题解析
来源 :中华考试网 2018-12-17
中2018年12月大学英语六级作文真题解析
一、大学英语六级写作题目预览
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to balance ① work and leisure /② job responsibilities and personal interests / ③ academic study and extracurricular activities. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
第一套题是“如何平衡工作和生活娱乐时光”，这就是我们预测班讲到的“劳逸结合”那道题。第二道题，是“如何平衡个工作责任和个人利益”，还是“如何平衡工作责任和个人兴趣爱好”呢?牛津辞典对interests的解释是，“业余爱好”，也就是你的爱好、兴趣所在。我们的预测范文“以兴趣为导向还是以市场为导向”命中了一半。第三道题，“如何平衡学业和课外活动”。稍微给这次六级进行一个总评，你会发现，现在六级题目出的非常好，只不过上面的题目单词有一些难，但这些难绝对没有超纲。难度较6月份，甚至17年、16年都没有特别大的起伏。话题更加接地气，它比6月份如何建立雇主雇员的关系，如何建立消费者和商家信任，可能稍微有一点点难。它让你平衡工作、学业、课外活动、工作责任。六级题更加偏重于大三、大四学生即将面对工作和学业选择的学生。
写作基本思路是：
l 开头段：引出话题，现象或者阐明平衡的重要性
l 中间段：
平衡工作和娱乐：安排时间，提高效率，防止过劳死
平衡工作责任和业余兴趣
平衡学业和课外活动：学业为主，合理安排时间，劳逸结合
l 结尾段：观点的归纳总结，重申重要性
这三套题任意一套题都可以用这个思路写，开头段引出话题，如何平衡，为什么要平衡;或者开篇阐明平衡A和B——课外活动和学业、工作责任和个人兴趣爱好、工作和业余活动之间平衡的重要性。第二段，“平衡工作和娱乐”，或者说“平衡工作责任和业余兴趣爱好”，是可以共用的。你都可以合理安排时间，还可以提高你的工作效率，这样你就有时间娱乐或者培养你的兴趣爱好。把身心健康摆在第一位，业余兴趣爱好，劳逸结合。它们可以共用一套逻辑。第三套题，平衡学习和课外活动，我们还是要兼顾二者，学业为重，没有在学校里面学到的知识和技能，今后出去创业、就业，都会有困难。第三段，把你观点归纳总结，重申一下平衡他们的重要性。
二、写作分值评估标准
写作满分 = 奖励分 + 基本分
奖励分：字迹、卷面、闪光点
基本分：语言、结构、内容
写作分数档次：0分，2分，5分，7分，11分，14分
关于写作框架：
一、引出话题(+图画/ 表描述 or 谚语引出 or 个人观点)
二、阐释话题(原因后果、对立观点、举例论证)
三、个人评论 +建议措施 + 憧憬未来
这次考试没有图画图表描述，直接引出观点即可。第二段，重点是原因后果、对立观点、举例论证，这次题目可以用对立观点、举例论证。第三段个人归纳总结，可以给出一些建议措施，告诉别人，如何劳逸结合、如何平衡工作和生活，最后憧憬回来。
关于结构：需要使用表示结构的关联词，这样能够让你的文章逻辑清晰。如，Firstly, Secondly, Finally, To begin with, In addition, Last but not least, For one thing, For another。
关于内容：
主题段落论证——
①议论文：各方观点
②说明文：原因后果
③记叙文：举例论证
关于语言，准确是第一要务，拼写不能错。语言句型多样化，我们要学会一些高端的或者复杂的句型，比如说倒装句，我们憧憬未来的时候就可以用到。还有一些从句，还有谚语警句。比如，People often say, “All work and no playing makes Jack a dull boy.” Ironically, it is easier said than done. 或者，“It is hard to balance … and … ” is an old cliché, but I totally agree with it. 这两句话都可以给大家文章里面增加亮点。
三、最新真题范文
2018年12月英语六级作文真题答案卷一
For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance academic study and extracurricular activities。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
第一段：学术学习和课外活动同等重要
第二段：分析重要性的原因。
第三段：得出结论。
It is generally agreed that academic study has been playing a crucial role in students’ life。 Nevertheless， we should not neglect the equal importance of extracurricular activities which can help us to build confidence and enhance overall abilities。
A number of factors might account for participating in both academic study and extracurricular activities。 With respect to academic study， one of the most common factors is to facilitate our academic competence。 There’s no doubt that study is the priority to students， and the academic performance， to a large extent， determines whether we can enter a prestigious school and get a decent job。 As for extracurricular activities， it is worth mentioning that it can supplement what we cannot learn from schools， such as the ability of critical thinking， problem-solving and addressing interpersonal relationship。
In view of how to balance academic study and extracurricular activities， effective measures should be taken into consideration。 In my perspective， the most useful technique is to promote our efficiency。 Only if can we manage our time well， we can have more time to do the both things。 To be more specific， a to-do list is highly recommended so that we can draw a clear picture of what we are going to do and distribute time to academic study and extracurricular activities in a more effective and balanced way。 With the efforts concerned， the imbalance will no longer be a problem。
2018年12月英语六级作文真题答案卷二
For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance work and leisure。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
第一段：描述工作和业余很难平衡的一个社会现象。
第二段：进行观点的阐述。
第三段：得出结论。
Along with the development of society， more and more problems are brought to our attention; one of the most serious problems is how to reach the balance between work and leisure。 People have different attitudes towards the problem。
It is generally agreed that work has been playing an increasingly important role in our life， because we need to work to earn money for life。 But if people put too much time on work， their health conditions will be damaged and suffer from kinds of diseases。 The sub health among workers has attracted extensive attention of the society， which can be found in TV programs， newspapers， university classes and many aspect of our everyday life。 Thus， when people has a completed the work responsibility， they should spend some time on personal leisure。 Then， they could get some rest both physically and mentally， and have better conditions for tomorrow’s work。 However， if people invest too much time on leisure， their career developments may be affected and lost opportunities for a better life。
From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusions that people should ensure their leisure time after work。
2018年12月英语六级作文真题答案卷三
For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance job responsibilities and personal interests。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
第一段：描述工作责任和个人兴趣很难平衡的一个社会现象。
第二段：进行观点的阐述。
第三段：得出结论。
Along with the development of society， more and more problems are brought to our attention; one of the most serious problems is how to reach the balance between job responsibilities and personal interests。 People have different attitudes towards the problem。
It is generally agreed that job responsibilities has been playing an increasingly important role in our life， because we need to complete them to earn money for life。 But if people put too much time on work， their mental conditions will be damaged and suffer from kinds of diseases。 The sub health of workers has attracted extensive attention of the society， which can be found in TV programs， newspapers， university classes and many aspect of our everyday life。 Thus， in addition to work responsibility， people should develop personal interests using spare time。 Then， they could enjoy the life and get rest both physically and mentally。 However， if people invest too much time on personal interests， their career developments may be affected and lost opportunities for a better life。
From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusions that people should focus on work responsibility during work time and develop personal interests on spare time。
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