2018年12月英语四级写作模拟试题：创建绿色校园

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of “Creating A Green Campus”.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

　　1.建设绿色校园很重要

　　2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

　　3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

　　参考范文

　　Creating A Green Campus

　　Nowadays the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be denied.

　　The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with, campus construction refers to green environment preservation and protection, such as planting more trees and flowers, which makes campus an ecological and natural resort, and advocating green products. For example, students are encouraged to avoid using disposable plastic containers in campus dining hall and recycle wasted batteries and other electrical products properly. In addition to the environmentally friendly practice, we shall make every effort to improve the moral standard and ethical level of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’ mental health. For example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams and plagiarizing in academic papers.

　　To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities. Second, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and school authorities. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people’s well-beings.

　　英语四级模拟试题写作步骤解析

　　(一)审题立意

　　1.首先审题目以及提纲，考生很容易判断出这是问题解决类作文。

　　2.该作文体现出一种较新的命题方式，首先在题材上，依然是我们所熟悉的校园类话题，同时兼顾社会的热点：环保问题，这也与社会的大背景有关系，刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会也同时关注环保减排这个主题，因此我们的作文也与社会热点有很大的关系。分析题目Green “绿色”和Campus “校园”是本作文的关键词。考生应该考虑绿色校园具体是什么含义。重点应放在绿色校园的含义以及我们应该采取的措施上。考卷已经列出了提纲，这是对“三段式”提纲类作文写作结构的考查。

　　(二)草拟提纲

　　Topic: Creating A Green Campus

　　Question: What’s a green campus and how to creat a green campus?

　　Outline:

　　Creating A Green Campus

　　I. Nowadays the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.

　　1.It is of vital importance to the students

　　2.It has a profound impact on society

　　II. The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.

　　1. green environment preservation and protection

　　2.a civilized atmosphere for students’ mental health

　　III. It is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus.

　　1.The law and regulations should be worked out

　　2.Enhanced the awareness of the students themselves

　　(三)落笔写作

　　1.阐述问题段：根据题目中的提纲，首先强调建立绿色校园的重要性，最好在此句之前做一个铺垫，介绍建立绿色校园受到人们广泛关注这一背景信息，即the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.

　　important the indispensable part for, has a profound impact on, significance等。

　　2.说明原因段：对绿色校园的两方面含义进行论述。另外在展开论证过程中，抽象句子要举例说明，如：such as planting more trees and flowers, for example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams，这些具体信息使文章更生动，容易理解。

　　to begin with, in addition to; furthermore/not only … but also …/ what’s more; for example/for instance/such as; in other words/ in particular等。

　　The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.

　　campus construction refers to green environment preservation and protection。然后举例进一步解释此含义，并强调其重要性：which makes campus an ecological and natural resort.在这个过程中考生要注意亮点词汇以及句型的使用。

　　in addition to引出“绿色校园”的第二层含义，即create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’ mental health.然后举例进一步解释此含义。如：For example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams and plagiarizing in academic papers.

　　3.解决方法段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，说明采取措施的必要性，如：To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.

　　We must…/ We should…等。

　　It is essential that …; Only by the co瞖fforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly.这样使自己的观点表达得既委婉又客观。

　　(四)修改润色

　　1.检查

　　检查是否包含考卷提纲列出的所有信息;各段落衔接是否连贯，使用In the first place, Furthermore, On the one hand， For instance， On the other hand等词可以达到这种效果;语法上单词拼写上是否有误，如较长单词indispensable，environmentally friendly，preservation，plagiarizing等，以及短语has a profound impact on，disposable plastic containers，in case of，bring …to its full play, bring benefit to以及最后一段中虚拟语气、倒装句使用是否正确。避免使用“汉语式英语”;检查文章标点符号是否正确。

　　2.润色

　　例如：Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people’s well-beings中使用倒装句的结构，凸显考生的语法功底。

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