第一段 提出观点

1. 通过背景描写益处论点或直接提出论点。2.论点中的道理或正确性表现。3.Besides/In addition,进一步阐述论点中的道理或正确性表现。/The truth of it is deep and profound./The truth of it is self-evident.

第一段 提出观点

1. 主题句：提出观点

2. 扩展句一：阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性表现。

3. 扩展句二：进一步阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性表现，或是强调论点的正确性。

第二段 列举论据

4.There are numerous examples supporting this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.5.A case in point is 第一个例子。6. 进一步说明例一。7.For another example, 第二个例子。8.进一步说明例二。

第二段 列举论据

4. 主题句：引出论据，开始论证观点。

5. 扩展句一：列举第一个例子

6. 扩展句二：进一步说明例一

7. 扩展句三：列举第二个例子

8. 扩展句四：进一步说明例二

第三段 总结观点

9.All the above-mentioned tell us that/It is no doubt that/Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that 重申观点。10.提出建议或指出注意事项。11.To conclude/Therefore,总结全文，呼应论点。

第三段 总结观点

9. 主题句：承接上文，重申观点。

10. 扩展句：提出建议或指出正确的做法或态度，呼应论点。

Haste Makes Waste

The Proverb “Haste makes waste” has been widely accepted for many years. It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a （1）down-to-earth way. （2）The truth of it is deep and profound.

（3）There are numerous examples supporting this argument. （4）A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of （5）“Helping the shoots grow by pulling”. This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss. （6）For another example, some parents and teachers,（7①） in order to improve children’s academic performance in a short time, tend to put too heavy burden on children. This, （7②） as a result, brings the children（8） nothing but great pressure.

（9）All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn’t（10） be over anxious for quick results. Everything has its own （11）developing law. Therefore, （12）whatever we do, we should not pay too much attention to the speed and ignore these laws.

点评

（1） 意为“脚踏实地”。

（2） 意为“其中蕴涵着深远的道理”

（3） 用于引出例证。

（4） 意为“典型的例子”。

（5） 引用“拔苗助长”的故事

（6） 用于引出另外的例子

（7） 插入语

（8） 意为“只是，仅仅”。

（9） 常用于得出结论

（10） 意为“急于求成”。

（11） 意为“发展规律”。

（12） 引导让步状语从句，意为“无论什么”。