SECTION 4: TRANSLATION TEST (2) (30 minutes)

　　Directions: Translate the following passage into English and write your version in the corresponding space in your ANSWER BOOKLET.

　　豫园是上海著名的古典园林，已有400多年的历史。花园设计独特，具有明清两代南方的建筑艺术的风格。园内共有40余景， 景色自然迷人，亭台楼阁、假山池塘和谐对称、协调均衡，其布局之精致自古闻名江南。

　　Renowned as a classical garden in Shanghai, the Yuyuan Garden dates back over 400 years. Its unique design is characterized by the styles of both the Ming and Qing Dynasties, which features the ancient southern architectures. The garden is dotted with 40 attractive scenic spots fascinating the tourists with its pavilions, pagodas, ponds and rockeries. The layout of the garden, which is harmoniously coordinated, has been earning the fame in South China for its delicacy since ancient times.

　　豫园原为明代一位大官的私家花园，始建于1559年，直到20年后才建成。此后曾几经变迁，屡遭摧残。所幸的是，从1949年上海解放时，园内的主要景点尚完好无损。从1956年开始，豫园经过多次修缮，重现其昔日光彩。

　　The garden used to be the private garden of a prestigious government official in the Ming Dynasty. Founded in 1559, its construction was not completed until 20 years later. The vicissitudes and ravages ensued. Fortunately, the major scenic spots in the garden remained intact when Shanghai was liberated in 1949. The Yuyuan Garden managed to attain its rejuvenation after several renovations.

　　【解析】

　　本段是典型的对外宣传材料，文章以短句为主，很有汉语的音律美。面对这类文章，我们应从意群出发，摆脱句式结构的限制。这样才能写出符合英文习惯的译文。

　　例如：“园内共有40余景， 景色自然迷人，亭台楼阁、假山池塘、和谐对称、协调均衡，其布局之精致自古闻名江南。”，这里的四字短语，如果逐字逐句翻译的话，就不太好处理了。译文将其处理成两个句子，利用英语的句子成分使语义丰满，这种翻译技法，大家可以借鉴学习。