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2016年商务英语BEC高级写作范文(3)

来源 :中华考试网 2016-09-20

  The headhunting process Ex 4: Sample answer: (234words)

  Dear Mr Jacobs

  I am writing to apply to the position of SalesAdviserfor the North East Region which wasadvertised inHerald International yesterday.

  Although I am currently working in theMarketingDepartment of a large multinational, Iwouldappreciate to work for a rapidly expandingyoungcompany such as yours.

  As you can see from my enclosed CV, I obtainedanhonours degree in Sales and Marketing from Nottingham University in 1994. Ithoroughlyenjoyed the six months I spent in working in Boots plc as pert of the course. Duringthis time Igained invaluable insights into the nature of sales. After leaving university Iinitially spent timeworking for a small local firm before finding my current job and I feel that Iam more suited tothe dynamics and varied demands of a smaller firm.

  Not only has my experience familiarised me with the challenges faced by the industry todaybut, having been brought up in the north east, I know the region, its problems and itsundoubtedpotential. As a result, I feel that I would be able to relate to your customers onboth aprofessional and a personal level.

  I am available for interview from 15 September and would be pleased to discuss my CVinmore detail then,

  I look forward to hearing from you.

  Yours sincerely

  A motivation survey

  Ex 3: Sample answer: (116words)

  Findings

  A number of employees clearly suffer from a lackof motivation as a result of dissatisfaction inone ormore areas of their work. The key findings areoutlined below:

  Staff feel undervalued by the company, both ona financial and a personal level. It is generallyfelt thatthe companyˇs competitors offer higher levels ofremuneration. The perception thatthe managersare unappreciative of staff efforts is particularly noticeable in the SalesDepartment.

  Certain employees feel under-challenged. The company is clearly not exploiting itshumanresources.

  There appears to be a breakdown of communication in the Production Department. Theconfusion and resultant ill-feeling towards managers has the potential to disrupttheproduction cycles.

  Recommendations

  We strongly recommend the following measures:

  An evaluation of job profiles throughout the company to assess whether skills could beutilisedmore efficiently

  A review of the current salary structure involving the comparison with similarorganisations

  It is also essential to investigate and take action regarding the communication intheProduction and Sales Department.

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