2017上半年商务英语BEC初级写作考前讲义二

　　(一)商务书信的文体风格

　　一封好的商业书信应该体现出语言自然精练、行文流畅、可读性高的文体风格。

　　商业书信的写作必须力求“自然”，不能满篇都是过时的商业行话。例子：

　　使用过时商业行话的句子 自然的句子

　　Incompliance

　　with the afore

　　-mentioned

　　agreement, dispatch of goods will be

　　undertaken

　　subsequent

　　to receipt of

　　said monies

　　. .

　　As agreed, we shall forward the

　　goods to you when we have

　　received your cheque

　　We should be obliged if you

　　could contact our Mrs Xiao at an

　　early date. . Please contact Mrs Xiao

　　soon.

　　We beg to inform you that we are

　　herewith canceling our order for

　　the same. . I am afraid we are

　　canceling our order for the

　　above goods.

　　Assuring you of our best attention at

　　all times, and awaiting the favour of

　　your early response. . I look forward to hearing

　　from you soon.

　　8 Due to the fact that your contract has

　　lapsed, we are unable to comply with

　　your request. . As your contract contract has lapsed

　　we cannot do as you request.