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2018年托福写作题库:哪种朋友最重要

来源 :中华考试网 2018-03-27

2018年托福写作题库:哪种朋友最重要

  【英文题目 】Thefriends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you canget help from?

  你喜欢交可以给你带来快乐的朋友还是可以帮助你的朋 友?

  1. A close and congenial friend is what every individual aspires after.

  拥有亲密无间的和志同道合的朋友是人人都渴望的。

  【 点评】:…… is what every individual aspires after …… 是人人渴望的

  【点评】:congenial friends = like-minded friends n 志同道合的朋友

  2. A day without friendship is like a day without sunshine.

  没有友谊的生活就像是没有阳光的生活。

  【点评】:个性开篇,谈及友谊对于生活的意义。

  3. a trustworthy friend n 值得信赖的朋友

  【点评】:trustworthy = reliable adj 可以信赖的

  4. Those who can go through thick and thin together with you

  那些可以和你风雨同舟的人(作家文采)

  5. a shoulder to cry on n

  可以提供慰藉的人

  【点评】:该短语是口语用法,比较地道,写作中可使用一次,体现表达的丰富。

  6. a humorous friend = a friend with great sense of humor n 一个幽默的朋友

  7. enjoy wonderful time together = have fun together v 一起享受欢乐时光

  8.sincere friends n 真诚的朋友

  9. intimate friends n 亲密的朋友

  10. bosom friends n 密友;知己

  11. Prosperity helps us make friends,however,adversity helps us try them.

  富贵易交友,患难见真情。(作家观点)

  【点评】:try sb v 考验某人

  12. A friend in need is a friend in deed

  患难见真情

  【点评】:in need adv 在危难中

  【点评】:in deed adv 真正地

  13. The most essential standard to judge a true friend is whether he or she willprovide us with timely support in time of plight.

  判断好友的最重要的标准就是,是否他或她愿意在逆境中给我们提供及时的帮助(观点总结)

  14. Whenever I run into unexpected adverse circumstances, it is Sandy thatprovides me with emotional support and spiritual consolation.

  无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境,Sandy 总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神安慰。(例证支持)

  15. I believe true friend can surpass the age limitation. I always take my father asmy trustworthy friend from whom I really benefit a great deal.

  我相信好友是超越年龄的限制,我一直认为爸爸是值得信赖的朋友,从他身上我获益良多。(细节展开)

  【点评】:重视自我情感的自由写作

  16. This debate reminds me of the experience of striving for attending my dreamgraduate school. After failing the exam for two times, I thought of giving up halfway,however, my father provided me with an ocean of assistance both financially andspiritually.

  话题使我联想起我为考研奋斗的经历,两次尝试失败过后,我曾经想过放弃,但是,我的爸爸给我提供了经济和精神方面的巨大的支持。(细节展开)

  【点评】:重视自我情感的自由写作,更加容易文思泉涌,更加容易打动考官,因为我们先感动了自己。

  17. Instead of curling into a ball beneath the table, I ended up mustering up mycourage, learning from my failure and marching courageously towards the nextopportunity.

  我没有蜷缩成球,藏在桌下, 相反,我最终鼓起勇气, 从失败中学习,为争取下次机会努力前行(作家文采)

  【点评】:curl into a ball beneath the table 蜷缩成球,藏在桌下(比喻用法)

  【点评】:end up doing sth v 最终以 …… 为结局(精彩表达)

  【点评】:muster up one’s courage to do sth 鼓起勇气做 …… (推荐背诵)

  【点评】:march courageously towards ……v 向着 …… 勇敢前行

  18. A humorous friend can never fail to help us to see the sunny side, especiallywhen we feel frustrated and depressed.

  幽默的朋友可以帮助我们看到积极的一面,尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。

  【点评】:never fail to = always adv 一直……

  点评:第一人称写法更加有说服力

  19. A humorous friend can, to large extent, help us remain cheerful in time ofadversity.

  富有幽默感的朋友,可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪。

  【 点评】:remain cheerful = see the sunny side = be optimistic about …… v 保持乐观

  20. Opting for friends who are willing to give unselfish help outshines choosingfriends with whom we can feel the sense of humor.

  选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友.

  【点评】:核心观点句:主题句亮剑或者尾段总结作家立场。

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