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2016年上半年PETS五级英语写作第一部分:困境

来源 :华课网校 2016-04-25

  第一部分:困境:

  一.评分标准:语言第一位;结构第二位;内容第三位;

  二.滔滔不绝意识流:

  1) 自由分段不可取;(compact)

  2) 语言杂乱不可取;(concise)

  3) 一段文章不可取;(concrete)

  三.无话可说真难受:

  1) 立论法: 广告效应,(P114)电脑时代,技术改变生活,大学学费上涨,学习和成功的关系,(P154: 朋友和家庭,电视上瘾, 劣质产品, 城乡差距), 环境保护的重要性

  驳论法:是否应该购买外国货,是否应该禁放烟花爆竹

  四.思维跳跃断层多:

  启:first, at present, first of all, above all, at the first place, on the one hand, for one thing, to begin with, 为第一观点。

  承:second, on the other hand, in addition, additionally, moreover, what is more, furthermore, third, last but not least,为第二观点

  转: But, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, unlike, otherwise, conversely, unfortunately, whereas, unfortunately, surprisingly, ironically

  合:Accordingly, therefore, as a result, consequently, in conclusion, to sum up, in general, on the whole, by and large, in brief, briefly speaking

  因果:due to/ owing to/thanks to/as a result of + 名词

  ___ in order to + 动词

  Along with/Coupled with + 名词

  As/since/because+句子

  Coupled with A is B that contributes to (is responsible for) C

  引用:As the saying goes, as somebody put it,

  句型首尾:Given all the above factors, it is safe to reach the conclusion that

  Taking into account all the above factors, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion

  五、低级错误常出现:

  三一致:主谓一致;时态一致;人称一致;两不能:不能串句,不能断句

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