2019年大学英语四级写作练习题：丰富大学生活
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中2019年大学英语四级写作练习题：丰富大学生活
大学英语四级写作练习题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1.许多大学生希望自己的校园生活能够丰富多彩;
2.有许多方式可以丰富大学生活;
3.对此你有什么建议?
大学英语四级写作参考范文
Nearly all students want to make their life on campus as colorful as possible. With a colorful life, a student can feel meaningful and confident. So it is necessary- for students to enrich their campus life.
There are several ways to live a colorful life on campus. It is a good choice for students to join various clubs and groups. By doing so, students can make a lot of friends whose interests are similar to theirs. Besides taking part in the activities on campus, students can also do some social practice, which is necessary for them to expand their horizon.
Taking myself as an example, I love to dance and join the dance club. I enjoy dancing with my friends and learn a lot from them. Moreover, I take an active part in social practice. Both are helpful to make my life on campus more enjoyable.
大学英语四级写作评析
文章的第一段提出丰富多彩的校园生活可以让学生感到自信，生活得有意义，随之自然地引出学生有必要学着使自己的校园生活丰富多彩。第二段提出使校园生活丰富多彩的两种方法。一种是参加各种俱乐部、学生团体;另一种是参加社会实践。最后一段作者重申主题。以自己为例，让读者知道自己的建议是有据可依的。
短文的第二段在介绍两种方法时没有用first、second一类的词，而是用了besides;最后一段用了分词短语taking myself as an example开头，通过这种方式，可以让阅卷老师觉得语言运用不落俗套。