2016年12月大学英语四级作文模拟及指导5
来源 :中华考试网 2016-09-20
中Directions:Study the following cartoon carefullyand write an essay in which you should
1) describe the cartoon,
2) interpret its meaning, and
3) point out its implications in our life.
【参考范文】
In the black and white drawing above, a youth gravely contemplates a narrow winding pathheading into a forest. Perhaps he thinks that his own future may be much like this path; full ofbends and curves, thorns and traps. The road to success is never anything but uneven anddifficult.
In fact, one could even say that the more successful one's life is, the more problems andhardships one must have overcome. The ability to work through difficult situations andunfortunate events only makes one stronger and more capable. Given that the road tohappiness always contains obstacles and setbacks, we should be well prepared for thehardships that life inevitably brings, and abandon the idea that life is smooth or easy. Wemust accept the fact that failures are unavoidable, whether they are failures in examinations,in finding a job, or carrying out a task. People who accept that their life will not always be simpleor calm are better able to handle problems when they arise. Those who are upset by each andevery small setback — and there are many people with such attitudes— do not have muchpotential. Failure is mother to success as it can strengthen one's will. Those who can drawlessons from failure are destined for success.
写作指导：
1、开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。 中间段：措施 结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结
开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least…… 结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them. 2、开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点) 结尾段：直接进入总结(即你的观点)开头段：It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary. 中间段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that ….. On the other hand, a great many people insist that…. 结尾段：From my perspective, however…. (你的观点) . Therefore, it’s time that (措施之类的) 6级作文万能句子(补充在“…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合) 重点背：1)5)6)7)句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。 1)Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life. ……能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，……可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩 2)For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。 3)……, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. ……占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西(充实了某人生活) 4)What's more, living in school
can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and
school
everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. 住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上 5)Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野 6)For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要 7)The majority of students believe that part-time job
will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力 8)By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验 9)Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. 10)1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响
2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响